Hi Hemani..

Welcome on first visit....!

Mujhe khushi hai ki Aap-ko yah rachna pasand Aayi...!

Aati rahiyega !

Shootradhaar !

loved this.

Priya..
 Kya aap ko lagta hai itna kuch likhne ke baad bhi koi raaj bache honge...
..Shama tao humne bujhne hi nahi di hai ...Hur Aandhiyon se bacha rakha hai..

Shootradhaar !

Shootradharji,
Mily khud se to bata dena
Dil ke kuch raaz bata dena
Andhere kaisy bhi ho mit jayen ge
Os katil ke naam ki shama jala dena...
Priya 

Goldie.....

Aap-ka aane ka Aur Hausala dene ke liye bahut-bahut Abhaar !

Shootr

Shootraji,
Last lines are very good....keep it up !

Namita..
Shubhkamnao ke liye bahut-bahut Dhanywaad !!!
Such tao yahi hai Andheron par jeet humesha Roshani ki hee hoti hai....Magar Kisi-kisi Raat ko Subah naseeb nahi hoti....Yah yathaarth na hote hue bhi koree Kalpna nahi kahi jaa sakti....!
.....Aap-ka Abhaar...Hausala -Afzai ke liye..!

Shootradhaar !

naye sire se khoj ke liye meri shubhkamnaye .
khud ko khojate hue jisase takraya jay ve door kahan hota hai .andhere to apani jagah zindagi ka sach hai par raushani ka shrot hath lag gaya na fir andhere bhi par ho jayege .

badal me bijli ..samahit hone ka kitna khoobsoorat bimb hai
thode se shabdo me poori kahani......jeevan ki
too good
namita

Nupur...

Kabhi-kabhi kam Shabd he apne bhav chodne main safal ho jaate hain...Aur ek choti si kawita pasand kar lee jaati hai..!
...Aap ke comment ne such main mujhe Hausal diya hai Aur behatar Likhne ka....

BAHUT-BAHUT SHUKRIYA...

Aati rahiyega...!

Shootradhaar !

Shootradhar

This is a beautiful poem.

Ab phir se khojuga khud ko
aur shayad tumhe bhi
apne andheron ko
saath liye

These are so vivid ...they tell a universal truth

This is one of your best.

keep writing

Nupur