MU..Sical....

Yes, You are very true....But cant say about time...Sooner or later it will be...!

Thanx for comment...!

Shootradhaar !

When would the poet's mood change... when would we get to read something cheerful, I woder.

Priya...

Jahan Aap jaise dost hon tao ....Sun-na suna-na jaroor chaahiye...Tabhi tao Sil-sila ruka kahan hai rukte-rukte chalne lagta hai....!

Shukriya Aap ki Nek aur Dariya-dili ke liye...!

Shootradhaar !

Komlet...

Main padh nahi saqa kaun sa sher aap ko pasand aaya magar jo bhi aaya mere liye khushi ki baat hai.....Shukriya Aane ke liye...!

Shootradhaar

Namita...

Jab taq seedhe such-he pathak milte rahenge tab taq shayad likhta bhi rahoon....Is gazal ke baad do likh chuka hoon....pata nahi viyogi hua hoon ki nahi...Dard ki kami kahaan hai...Mil hi jaate hain chahe unchaahe....!

Thanx for comment...!

Shootradhaar

Shootraji,
Thx for posting gazals...i read both..liked this one better but will have to re read.
later...

Kahiye be jhijhak kahiye.

rcsood

shootradharji,
Hadd ho gaye...? Hum to tab se sunany ke liye hi baithy hain or aap kehty hain kis se kahon? Bolo doston ki kami hai kya???
Priya 

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khamoshiya odh kar need aati hai kya.......
gazal bhi kahiye ...nazm bhi kahiye ....kavita bhi likhiye....aur dil se kahiye ....seedha sachchaa kahiye .
pant ji theek hi kah gaye hai......viyogi hoga pahala kavi.......dard ke bina creation mushkil hai

namita